Is a good song

this song is the best......

ok ..

if this is your first work , you did an awesome job at making that melody! :D
it needs quite a lot work yet, but hey! it's your first work :D
everything what a normal song needs is in here, and after that you can go editing and EQ'ing that stuff so it sounds much better then it is ! :D
try using the mixer channel! you will be surprised what you can do with that :p
also, you can use automations :p
( if you aren't using it yet :p )
so this is what i wanted to say ;)
gl later , keep producing and you will get better fast :D
if you need something more, pm me then ;)

btw, could you check out my latest song i've made ? drop a review or something so i know what you think of it ^^ ( if you want so huh :) )