You have so much potential!

I'm not joking about this one. Even though some might say this is awful, to be honest, it really inst that great. But I am assuming this is one of your first songs you have ever made. It seems that you already understand the styles of rhythms and the JUMPSTYLE genre. The melody is alright as well. Just keep trying and learning from the mistakes, and you will become very very good. Just keep it up!

-LoudCore