An interesting rhythm with a dark view
To whom that obviously don't appreciate this type of house generally don't know the darker side of dance music. Almost every genre has it: House, Trance, Hardcore, even Industrial with minimalistic qualities that date back to the 8-bit music scene...and YES, there are tracks- you just have to search for them.
I find this track quite unique in its own way. True, it's created in 2 hours, but it's done in a fashion where you intended to experiment with different things. That's the reason why I find this track intriguing. True, it doesn't need to be fancy or appealing to everyone who listens to it, but in my ears, I actually was listening to this while playing a puzzle game, and it really clicked that moment very well.
Some things can be improved. The length is pretty adequate, but I was hoping for a longer transition, somewhat more of another minute or so, then fade away in anticipation for something more. That and the moment you had that 1:30 transition to expand it just a tad. Not that it was bad to hear the first time, but I always like it when artist pull me away from that vortex of reality and put me in another dimension where I'm completely stuck in. Just a little suggestion.
Otherwise, I feel that you have potential to go far with this piece- is it possible for an extended version of this in the future? If you do, let me be the first to hear it.