hey, cheer up man :D

Yeah, i know how it is, but what can you do, you know, there are mostly 13 year old boys on this site that just vote zero without even listening and the world is their oyster ;)

Anyway, on to the track, ... I didn't review any of your songs for a long time I know (im a bastard), but i've been folowing, listening, voting. You're definetely improving with time, getting the feeling for it, adding more depth to your tracks, you know that's what counts, experience and learning stuff.

This is a pretty good random song, yeah it's random, that piano doesn't really fit in on occasion and it gets really repetitive over time since it's a simple melody that doesn't change and you play it from beggining to end, but it builds nicely, good instruments. I LOVE that sound that you fade in from 0.48 till 0.54, that was really sweet.

Anyway this loop is all about the melodies, since there is hardly any percussion except the kicks, so i'd make a longer main melody, or change it over time.

Other than that, you're good.
And don't give up on music man, keep making it, improving, don't worry about zero voters and lack of attention, you just do your thing and grow :D.

See ya, man, have a beer (or 6) ;)