Here is the updated version. It has more percussion, which would be the reverse crash, the clap and the ride. I added a different bg pattern (the bell sounding thing that plays through most of the song) in the middle. And, of course, its a bit longer : ).

I need to know if all the instruments I have here go well together, if I should change up the order of things (if so, how?), what other instruments would go well with this, and if the levels are ok or need work.

Thanks for listening :)