This is my first submission and also one of my first songs, I'm better at making mixes but I've tried making some songs, I hope you like it. BTW I'm also known as Magific :)
I accept any suggestions, but don't be rude xD
A good first song.
You have some good beats going on, but at the moment it's really more of a back beat than a song. You need some sort of instrument to kind of lead the whole song. Right now it just seems sort of incomplete. It's a good first upload though, I've heard worse first tries.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
DJD-M 
