Bass and Kick
I find the bass and kicks a little annoying in the first portion of the song. You helped yourself get back on track, and keep me listening to the song by the slight buildup, and higher pitch of the melody.
I suggest adding a deeper kick, and a bit higher variety of sounds.
Keep it up!
lots of room for improvement, i think. lower the bass a bit and organize the drumming a bit more. i really like the idea of being simple, but this is a bit too simple for me, i mean...three instruments on a song like this? cmon dude, gimme some counter melodies or something! you got great potential on this song bro. almost reminded me of donkeykong ;)
could you review my stuff for me? it'd be greatly appreciated ;)
Thx for the review. Im going to put some more work in to this song and we'll see were it leads :'>