Stay True to.....

U decide how the song gets made, u did a great job of being yourself and letting the music flow strait from your mind to here. dont adjust YOUR songs to THEIR liking just stay true to what u feel. Great Song, to Build upon this song would break it.

ferry nice

its verry good the tempo jus needs to be a bit slower but i could defintly use this in one of my raps hope u dont mind

slow the beat down

I love the melodies in this beat mos def. What I can say is slow your tempo down by at least 10-15 bpms and sound like more of a rock ish type track with a light break of hip hop.

Nice

I like this peace :D