pretty good song yo, just add a synth or two inside of it just like u did at 0:41 and probably a hi hat too. Also, try making it alot l onger, sounds like the start to a really good track. good background effects.
Other than that it still sounded cool. Keep up the good work yo, and gl on ur future submissions.
BTW, i make music also, do u mind taking a peek? tell me what u think...