Well I'm really new at making music so hopefully listeners dont hate this stuff too much....I do have a habit of making my music sound like its a video game though! but enjoy!
Excellent!
This is a great piece, but especially good for someone new to the field! I hope you'll be able to hone your skills even more in future and produce more stuff like this. I do agree with Raikuga that the ending is somewhat bizarre, but apart from that the melodies were good and the edgy saw-wave sounds you used were superb.
Sup
It's too videogameish for me to put on my playlist, but it's a good song. Nice use of bass; I'm tired of people holding back on their bass.
You also chose a nice way to build the song up. One turnoff for me is when a song take 1:58 to build up then ends at 2:30. But you also kept it fresh and not repetitive. The ending sounds really weird, like you didn't mean to end it there. You should probably work on that.
My only problem is the 8-bitness.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Drofwarc 
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