Peaceful

Hey,I have to admit that this is pretty good,but since your new you really should have start off with a shorter song instead of 5 minutes cause that's a little too much for a beginner i know I'm one of them(Check em out),however it gets a little repetitive but I still like it. Needs a quicker build up.It gets it really good, and make sure the melody is a tad complex, and changes, not too complex but no to simple either,plus you have your main melody, and something that the melody goes into and changes. A different melody which links to the main one. Im not really talking about a verse/chorus, but you get what i mean.Peaceful