Review
A quick comment about the comment below this one. It is stupid to rate about potential because everyone can make the best song in the word but that doesnt mean what they just made is good. Now onto the review.
Good:
Very clever and original bass/drums
I liked the rhythm and how it sort of changed and gave you a feeling it was going faster and slower
Improvements:
The bass was weak
Extend it if it made as a song and have a final ending, if not make it shorter and more like a loop
The mixing was weird and even all the way across. It needed to have the chords in the background, that seemed to be the melody, stick out and be alot louder.