Good start, needs smoothing
I guess I have to join the "punchier bass" club and say that some harder-hitting bass will do wonders for this. Also, work on smoothing some of the melody transitions, the transition a few bars into the track that takes the organ from pan to no pan is seriously abrupt and detracts quite a bit from the flow. The basic feel is good though, I think with some work on making it feel a bit more congruous will make this track stand out.
meh, i wanted to make a song that didnt have shake your house bass
i think its great. muh ears sleep and when i listen it fucks them awake
ill fuck you awake if you want me to, personally.
You're on the right path. But I semi-agree with the guy below me. It does need a bit of a heftier bass.
its mah babieh bass song :3
its decent but the bass is soft and weak, and everything overall could use an extra , something. and its a little slow an its not a good enough song to be this repetitive. Sorry if it sounds mean.
:3 not at all it will help me improve on my next songs
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.