OK, I did this for practice and to try try out garage band. It has actually been a few years since I last made a song, but I think that is my best one so far. Enjoy!!
Made in garage band in about 4 1/2 hours.
Reminds me of eclipse
Some parts are a little out of tune. It has good progression. The melody reminds me of a song called eclipse. It is pretty ambient. I am not positive if this is trance, but idk. I must say, I kept waiting for a beat or some bass to kick in, but it never did. Which is why I think this is more ambient than anything.
But I like it. Good job. 4/5 - 8/10
Thanks !!!!!! I'm new to this and I have had big gaps of time inbetween the songs I did make. So you critique helps, and I wasn't sure what genre to put it in. At first I was going to put in ambient, oh well.
Edit, I forget to mention that I've never heard the song eclipse before is it good?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
toshema 
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