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Jul 20, 2009 | 6:05 PM EDT
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842.8 KB
43 sec
4.25 / 5.00

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Rated 4.25 / 5 stars
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Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern

Author Comments

Ok well Z-Tone was like "DUDE THIS IS GOOD! SUBMIT IT" so i did... i think it sounds like shit, and my mic is to shit, its getting alkinds of feed back and im like Blah i dont care no more... so here take this half ass demo and rape a watermellon with it

got the beat from

in the concreted war zone, everyone cold to the bone,
skin touch of stone, all alone
tossed in there darkness, void,
and avoid the anguish it brings,
angels don't sing when there
roped in the basement, under 6 layers of cements,
incinerate what left, gold holy powder
brush it off the corps dust, ash to ash,
black powder gas, a sinners lust lasts, slashed n
gashed body blood bath, night noise echo mad laughs as
i drag cadavers past lone streets, no heartbeat
a monster in the making, where gods words braking
cressus cold flesh kiss of death breath, and i feel
alive when i close my eyes

i hope you like



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Everything is awesome

The vocals mix nicley into the song and it feels like it belongs in a show where it takes place during the apocolypse ( I don't think I spelled that right XD ) Epic win man

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Druids-Warcry responds:



Rated 5 / 5 stars


The newest 16 Bar Assassin is here.

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Druids-Warcry responds:

why must you mock me so


Rated 5 / 5 stars


Man those lyrics are tight. I can see you're starting to get the hang of flowing to beat etc. With some work you'll be a rapper yet my friend. Hit me up soon for a collabo, you on the beat me on the mic, like the stairway dayz. Speak soon my brother.

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Druids-Warcry responds:

forsure man! really that sounds bitchen


Rated 4 / 5 stars


The lyrics was great, and the quality wasn't bad.
But your flow was off you have to work on that.

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Druids-Warcry responds:

hey man! thanks :P


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Dude the lyrics are nicee

But you gotta get your flow down. And i could barely understand you 5o% of the track, idk if its the mic or the way it was EQd.
but im pretty sure with a little more time and effort on this track it would be hot as shit.

Keep at it forrealz, you can write.

4.34 / 5.00 (- 0.021) =/

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Druids-Warcry responds:

thanks man! glad you think my lyrics are dope :)