Wowza...
The newest 16 Bar Assassin is here.
Ok well Z-Tone was like "DUDE THIS IS GOOD! SUBMIT IT" so i did... i think it sounds like shit, and my mic is to shit, its getting alkinds of feed back and im like Blah i dont care no more... so here take this half ass demo and rape a watermellon with it
got the beat from shadowville.com
(words)
in the concreted war zone, everyone cold to the bone,
skin touch of stone, all alone
tossed in there darkness, void,
and avoid the anguish it brings,
angels don't sing when there
roped in the basement, under 6 layers of cements,
incinerate what left, gold holy powder
brush it off the corps dust, ash to ash,
black powder gas, a sinners lust lasts, slashed n
gashed body blood bath, night noise echo mad laughs as
i drag cadavers past lone streets, no heartbeat
a monster in the making, where gods words braking
cressus cold flesh kiss of death breath, and i feel
alive when i close my eyes
i hope you like
Wowza...
The newest 16 Bar Assassin is here.
why must you mock me so
ASH MY MAN!!
Man those lyrics are tight. I can see you're starting to get the hang of flowing to beat etc. With some work you'll be a rapper yet my friend. Hit me up soon for a collabo, you on the beat me on the mic, like the stairway dayz. Speak soon my brother.
forsure man! really that sounds bitchen
Interesting
The lyrics was great, and the quality wasn't bad.
But your flow was off you have to work on that.
5/5
hey man! thanks :P
Dude the lyrics are nicee
But you gotta get your flow down. And i could barely understand you 5o% of the track, idk if its the mic or the way it was EQd.
but im pretty sure with a little more time and effort on this track it would be hot as shit.
Keep at it forrealz, you can write.
Monk
4.34 / 5.00 (- 0.021) =/
thanks man! glad you think my lyrics are dope :)
A new druid song? Finally.
Well ya finally got the guts up to post a track with you doing yo thing! Good work man! Seriously like i told you when you sent this to me earlier its a pretty nice track all in all. I'm not gonna say what everyone else has said even if its true haha cuz you've heard it enough. Keep on it!
Wyldfyre1
haha yeah i know its about time right? haha well thanks for the review WF it makes me smile knowing your still keeping people up. and thats why we <3 you
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