This was my favorite theme in Loz:OoT and it was Bad A$$ B4 but now its... UB3R 7331. LoLz
Now i wouldn't say its bad,
in fact its good just that it needs a bit more work. I can see what you were going for here. sort of making it more modern. I must admit you do a nice job at it. Just a nice job though. Not great.
the beginning turned me off for a moment but after that it had exceeded my expectations. Work on that begining.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.