to me, i appreciate the storm... every act of nature is beautiful, death included... but not in an emo way LOL
You begin by sweeping the lower piano in, blowing the clouds into scene, then the three chords strikes... like a bell mourning the loss of a perfect day. a sweet gentle caress of the left hand play gentle warping of the seas, whilst a right hand clutches the melody and throws it in the eye of the storm! the building of the melody and bass to me show the developement of the winds and as the chord choices darken so do the clouds! you play some wonderful melodies and your harmonies are excellent, although a few i would choose to have inverted lower as opposed to having them higher. :D the pitter patter rain fall was wonderfully simulated BUT! this piece would be so much more emotional if you have the advantage of a velocity changer...
certainly an adventurous little piece! i bet its wonderful on a real piano :D
thank you, again exactly what i was going for, and yeah, itd be very nice to have better quality and ability to master, etc. thanks for the review
I like the melody; it's simple, but haunting.
There's something about the three chords at 0:16ish that really works well; makes it sound like everything's getting destroyed...the kinda sad music you'd hear in a movie where the sound of the storm itself is muted out and all you hear is this and all you see is he destruction it causes. Very emotion-evoking.
The second line of the melody at 0:46 is beautiful, simply beautiful.
The piano at around the 2 minute mark really does remind me of rain, and the three chords straight after it again really work well.
And hwat can be said about the harmonies leading up to the end...there are no words.
I love the little dissonances you add in...not to mention there's this motif that seems to go on through the whole thing, which is a feat in itself.
Really, really good work.
thanks a million, thats exactly word for word what i was going for, everything you said is what i was shooting for, you seem to understand music and its phsycology very well
Wash it away
Sounds jus like a storm comein through ready to wash away all the struggle and strife. Really u could make this in2 a fat ass hip hop beat, but it's great the way it is. This track made me sit and think how lovely it would be 2 see paradise, but it seemes like its always blocked by a storm. When all along in the end it was the storm u were in that took u to paradise in the first palce...maybe I went a lil too deep lol. Kudos on the track bro
hey thanks man, and yeah that was kinda the point, thanks for the review