Awesome

Wow, that's awesome! Can't wait to hear the full one!

heh its been a while

well i kind of like it. i see that yer using those claps again...good kick, but try adding a closed hat on the kick,and plz do sumthing aboiut that bass...its too damned low. it almost sounds like an annoying rumble in the backround.
well really since im damned tired right now i cant really tell u n e thing else. besides telling to u to follow what u think would sound good. if u think the song is good, mostly other people will too. Just go with the flow and yer emotions. thats what makes artists truly great.

theblackhawk--_--

So-so

Eh, the notes were pretty good, but the percussion was just too...blandish. The whole quiet part I didn't really like either. It was OK though, dont get me wrong.

Hm...

I finally have something I dislike from you guys. I don't like how you keep making that synth play, then drop and slowly fade in all the time. It actually seems like your using this to make the song sound a lil more diverse when it is really kinda... bland. Not a big lot changes to the feel of the song. I mean, I like the general feel of it... but it just seems played out.

I mean, I notice the differences but they aren't huge differences.. not enough to make me get into the song.

You need a whole new "main" synth or at least a second one on a close pattern to this. I think this would benefit from a really kool, low freq bass pad rather than those deep bass hits.
I think this would also sound really kool whith a really flowing and "trippy" sounding synth thats panning around really nicely for the really good 3D affect. You have a synth playing in the back that sound like it would do good it it were getting some serious panning.

Anyways I'm not really sure what you could do to this. You guy are both genious' and 2 of the top audio portal artists. I'm sure you can figure something out :p

Meh

This is pretty cool, good synth sounds and beat, not bad bass, my main criticism is that the chord structure has been used a billion times before, but there's no such thing as original music anymore... Also, the melody seems a little weak, but it def has good rythym so that is cool. I really love how at the 11th beat or so through the 4 bar chord loop you put in a kind of break in the drums and then pick up the beat again, that was well done, adds to the song nicely, also the harmonized melody is cool.