It has potential alright ^__^

There you go. Making a full song instead of a loop is a better training and you've proven that you're good at it as well ^__^. The pause/piano-interlude was nice.

If you can, you should change the drum presets since the beat doesn't sound perfect (the rhythm is good, but it's the sound that isn't the best).

Apart from that. Great job, keep on practicing man ^__^.
9/10
4.5/5 =>5/5