whoa
hmm, some of the note actually sound like their detuning as their being played, i dont know if you did that on purpose or if its just the synth you use, but it could be very damaging to a song if not controlled, although i dont really know how to controll detuning, i generally try to just stay away from it
this one isnt as good as your other track, it seems like uch less time went into it, although you do say its not your style, which seems a bit apparent, i actualy have a pretty good hardstyle track that you might want to check out, i think it hits the genre more on the head of the nail, if that makes sense, this is a bit to experimental sounding for people to like, which would explain its lower score
i dont realy know what to say about this track as far as advice, its not your style so i dont know how far any advice would go : \
peace dude
SessileNomad