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2nd song i make
its an edit of Shift.- hope you like it.
suggestions and stuff are very welcome. (dont listen to it with low volume, cant feel the bass well=P)

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I liked your leads very much and the instruments you chose for them. My main criticism was the percussion effects. Seemed a bit too quick for the beat, gave it sort of a limping feel, and the change at 1:02 got even worse. With the exception of the percussion though, I enjoyed the rest very much.

Pretty Good

Not bad, but it could use a little more substance. I was hoping for a "part B" at some point, but it just kept going with a few variations on the part A.

So in the future, just try mixing it up a bit more; and give our songs a little more variety. I like what I'm hearing here, just not when it's effectively the same thing over and over for over a minute.

neuroAcid responds:

try listening to my first song
its same first part with a 2nd part as you are saying
will have your comment in mind for future pieces.

Great possiblilty

You have a good skill for this music but you need to make this one a bit longer so that great bass lasts for longer. You also need to add something else in there. I dont know what but it just felt a little empty. Good work though.

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Jul 8, 2009
3:03 PM EDT
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1.9 MB
1 min 21 sec

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