Interesting.
It seemed to me that there was a little too much going on at some points in the music. There were some parts where the beat got a little lost due to that. Be careful not to use too many effects or you kill off the flow of the song! Other than that, the idea was pretty good. Good collection of sounds, and nice lines from Star Trek (I'm pretty sure that's where you got those). For 7 hours, this is pretty well done. Keep up the work and good luck on your future submissions. ^_^