Nicely done.

I think this deserves a ten, especially with how much better it sounds than before.
If anything, the only things that I can really think of.. If you want to work on this song more, is to add a little percussive instruments like high-hats and such, and maybe through a little compression on the kick, but that's about it, overall I really like this tune, it's goin on my iPod for sure.
- Aaron