read me yo

ok, i enjoy the lil melody ur using... its definately golden. yeah for happy trance! a b section'd be fuckign sick. like use a bass sound to play off the melody... cuz this thing has th epotential for a sexy 10

Yeah

This was quite well done, but there's just something about it that didn't really do it for me...I mean, it is certainly a great track, but it just didn't click for me, almost sounds too happy, and that "du-du-du" thing blackhawk was talking about did get a little annoying after a while, although it was cool when you kind of changed it up partway through the song. The percussion is good for the most part, but there is at least one part where the rythyms being played by the drums don't really match what else is going on; like maybe in another context it would be nice but it just doesn't mesh well. I like the soft string pads, I usually use a lot of strings in my own shit. Nice work man

well my friend

i liked it alot. the only thing i kind of didnt like was that part that went du-du-du. if u understood that(which i bet u didnt). i liked the rough sounding open high hat, but i think that the snare was too low. I think in my honest opinion, if u added an arp and a kick ass main chorus, and if u sped it up by like 30-40, it could be used in a dance club. good job, but try to use more variety in your du-du-du thingy. o and the hats were overpowering. plz turn them down man.

P.S. plz review my new song'Ripped and torn. its my first attempt at abstract DNB and i think that yer critism could help.

-theblackhawk-

good, original beat

not bad, good beat, try to use more instrumentals when making an audio track