This is really good though has a little lack of diversity try making some braks sometimes where the chords+lead changes(try listening to Bounc3's "Lunatic Something"(Hähä i suck at names:P all i know is that it is 3 years old.)
That might help you to inspiration.
nah this song is done and gone
Hey, some pretty good ideas in this one dude, sounds better than what I remember the last one as. The Purcussion still needs to be tuned up for the most part. the song doesn't really seem to go anywhere, but has a good feeling to it, and would work for game or flash music. An idea might be to try and experiamenting with melody work, try adding in an arpegiated background melody to it, if you could get me a midi of this I could show you what I mean, and I could send you some midi's of my stuff so you can see some examples and maybe work off of. peace
Ryan CHampion (aka SGF)
u reviewed the wrong song lol, thanks for the review tho