argh, should have taken this farther

I think this is great, just too frickin short. Also, the loop has a big silence in it. Bring up the snare level, and add a riding base. I love the greasy feel of this, though.

Mellowish...

Not too bad. I could see this loop being used in a menu or during a storytelling/conversation point in a game. It has a mellow tone but still has that edge for someone preparing to go to war.

Keep up the good work.

-MustardGT