Lemme start with saying I loved the melodies. Fantastic violin melody and I loved the echo voices. A bit synthy, yet I like that. The beat was a bit simplistic for my tastes however. I would recommend not just looping the same pattern over and over again, give it a little variety. After that I would say just making this longer, build off of what you have here to make a full length song.
Thanks for the feedback! As you can see I mostly make trance so this was a new experience for me. Took me awile to learn how to make a nice hip-hop beat. I guess im still stuck with repetative trance in my head :P