Alrighty...
Lemme start with saying I loved the melodies. Fantastic violin melody and I loved the echo voices. A bit synthy, yet I like that. The beat was a bit simplistic for my tastes however. I would recommend not just looping the same pattern over and over again, give it a little variety. After that I would say just making this longer, build off of what you have here to make a full length song.
7/10
4/5