Jazzy LOL!

Nice Job man, for yer first try, this was pretty gd, it's calming and jazzy. Try to vary in drums and melodies though cuz it's very repetetive. I like this style so i suggest you keeep trying Electro-Jazz LOL!!! So 9/9 and 5/5 ;P

SHEF

tHIS IS OK .GOOD 4 A DRIVING GAME

Just wow

seem like everyone's hatin' on your song.
not me cup of tea either, but you "COULD" make this song WAY better if you somehow composed a new jazzy melody or bass so the song doesn't repeat all the time. oh yea, word of advice (USE YOUR IMAGINATION TO MAKE A SONG! DON'T RELY ON MUSIC LOOPS ALL THE TIME) =D
-Runey

Dull and uninspired

If I knew anything about music making software, I would assume this was a template you barely edited. Granted it's a nice song, but it's nothing. There's nothing that makes it up.

eMac?

Didn't know there was such thing.
Anyway, terrible song and very unoriginal. 1 for the effort.