focus on the low tones and base
The toms are good but you need a betetr sample of them. this tune would be great if you knew how to make it in the low end, the deep bases need imiproving. The melody with the bouncing pulses is wicked good, keep that no matter what. The ruiner of it is the crashes repeated though of low quality and mono. That I think ruins it the most. The plastic synthlead (is that the 3osc?) flows well.
Thanks for the review! I'll try to do what you say.
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