hey
hmm its cool that u recorded. The sound is a bit scratchy tho
the into is offputting because it is quite repeditive.
I think you need some more practice.
you will start to make some good songs after your 10, to your 15 or even 20th song
so dont give up if u get some bad reviews. I know i have got some bad reviews lol :D
well anyway, hope you got something outa that. Listen to my beat now lol