Very Nice

Not one of your best songs,for example,Retraktion,in my opinion,is your best song so far,but in fact,very good.I agree with sumguy720 when he says there is an awkwered pause.The beginning is pretty.The bass line has a good part in this but needs some more "umph,"or it needs to have a bigger role in this song.I put in my most sincere thoughts into this.I hope you wont get mad at me or something. XD I mean don't get me wrong,this is an awesome song overall,just needs a couple of things added and subtracted,that's all.

-Sincerely,
Suckmabulletzez

awww

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cutE ITS LIKE A LITTLE DOGGY!

I WANT To sqz

SImple

Yes, it is a very simple song, which doesn't seems to have too many instruments. It's also interesting where at times it seems like your stressing the bass a lot, and it's very clear. But otherwise, this is a well done song, along with your others.

What zenla should have said.

I really like the intro, everything is done very well. The buildup is nice and slow, but it gets a little boring. You could say my attention span is short, but I really think you should add something to that buildup, some sweeping sound effects, maybe a deep echoing drum, something that grabs the listener's attention. The focus of the song is way downplayed. once we get past your buildup (the silence is awkwardly long BTW) the lead pads kind of fall into the background.

Your lead is pretty cool. good mastering too. I don't know what overhaul is, but I'm impressed that it's just a triangle wave... and your ideas are fresh.... you really need to fill this out though.

That's all I can think of right now. Good ideas all around. 7/10 5/5

Keep working on this song if you haven't gotten tired of it.

heh

It is kinda cute you repeat same thing but with bigger volumne each time