So I really don't think doing songs about the 'current' females in my life is a good idea anymore, but I had a lot of inspiration for this one. My exgirlfriend Sydney "Sparrow Hawk" was such a HUGE source of inspiration for me, so this song is for her.
This is quite the change up from Sad Day, and if you've heard it you'll understand that it's a wonderful feeling to be moving on from that.
So listen, vote and review! If you like it, download it and ipod it. If you don't like it, download it, burn it to CD, and piss on it. I don't care. XD
Beat is Critical Decision [new] by T-Free
Lyrics:
I wanna stencil you, tattooed in leopard print
Every spot a memory I've got of time that we've spent
Together, we don't play like it'll last forever
So we're livin every minute for the joy of the endeavour
'Oh so clever" will be the catchphrase for your face
Any time it's said, into my head's your picture in it's place
Chasin you through the streets, through the sheets
Til I'm takin everything you do to these beats
My b-baby drives me crazy, she's my lady I know
I can handle twists and turns on this straight-jacket road
Wait, grab her and show the satellites her eyes
When I snatch her up and kiss her, lift her up to the sky
At night she cries
No, screams my name
She might find without me sex just won't be the same
What we see might change as we pass the months by
Didn't know her eyes were gonna show me such sights
It just might (just might) be somethin like love
Cuz sometimes (sometimes) I feel her in my blood
Whenever we're together my heart beats to the right
I'll always remember that she showed me such sights x2
You know it's just like a poem that I'm squeezin and holdin
I'm seein it's the season as the trees are shinin golden
Leaves are flourishin and growin on the beat that plays
Growin farther away from the past and Sad Days
That grey raincloud has gone away now
Birds are singin melodies and no two have the same sound
The break down has passed, got a hand that I clasp
Two lovers walk together, the b-beauty and the 'masq
Though this road that we go down is happenin fast
We can't help but sit back and laugh at the fact
That we control the pawns as the King and the Queen
With just a look and a nod and a yadadamean?
Pleased a god it'd seem, earth tilts on it's axis
I've got such a dreamgirl I wanna do backflips
Just thinkin about her makes it fun to write
I never believed I would ever see such sights
It just might (just might) be somethin like love
Cuz sometimes (sometimes) I feel her in my blood
Whenever we're together my heart beats to the right
I'll always remember that she showed me such sights
It just might (just might) be somethin like love
Cuz sometimes (sometimes) I feel her in my blood
Whenever we're together my heart beats to the right
I can't believe she could show me such sights
It came to me.
That i don't think i've reviewed anything you've done off your profile. The song is freaking awesome for one and then you added the flow to it wich made it even better. Nice flow, great over all lyrics, its nice to hear something other then diss tracks every so often hah. Over all man you keep it up!
Much luv.
Wyldfyre1
Tyvm wyldfyre. I was actually kinda starting to wonder why I'd never gotten a review from you, lol. I had been worried that my flow wouldn't be able to match the amazingness of the song itself, so I'm glad to hear that I did, indeed, do it well.
And yeah, diss tracks can be entertaining on a humorous level, but I'm more into making cats think, or just expressing myself as a person. I wish there were more artists on here like that, but I suppose there can't be one without the other.
Thanks again for the review.
Very good stuff~
TMI indeed, but you're forgiven for the smooth rhymes. Keep it up.
You chose a great backing track too.
Good shit for sure
"She might find without me sex just won't be the same" Little cocky there eh? lol
Ok, only thing I can find here, that echo you did at the end is um... how do I put this... Bad. Try using either an actual echo effect or delay rather than just repeating your voice. I think that would sound better.
Great flow, good sound all that stuff. One problem with T-free's beats for an MC is finding the right vocal volume. Because his beats are so loud, you want to push your voice up a lot, but you managed to avoid that it seems. In fact, once again, I think your vocals should be a tad higher.
In response to the first line, she's the one telling me that even after we break up she's going to make me cheat on whoever I'm with cuz she loves my dick that much. But maybe that's TMI?
The echo: Yeah, I'm recording in Audacity, which I'm not accustomed to (damn GarageBand lol) so I'm still figuring everything out.
Volume: Again, I'm in Audacity, so when I amp the vox, I don't want to go over 0 db, but I really don't like hard-limiting either so I've been turning up the track volume which only moves in increments of 3 lol. I'll get it.
Thanks Wyze. Always love your reviews.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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