This song didn't do it for me.
It could be that I do not know enough about this genre but for me it took too long to get anywhere special.It was just too flat and bland for me for too long.When it did get to that special place it was around 1:28 thats where it got real catchy and was pleasent to listen to.People will probally disagree tho and this was just a quickie so its cool.Keep making music!