Try to change the main synth
I am not going to put stars this time, because i feel that you haven't finished this track, still i i am going to rate 5 so people can hear it, and give you some advice ,man :)
I would recommend you change the synths cuz they sound mistuned, you should try something slower, stylish , because drums are just great and badass, it has potential but you need to work more on this one :)
I am not saying that (this track sucks ,worst track etc) or some other common comment that newgrounds users says sometimes.
I am saying that this track needs That "touch" to make it sound it good, you just need to work on on this one.
Anyways i really like the banner you got on your profile, its just awesome!!!
Take Care and good luck!!!