well,
its your first try on trance..
so i wont be too hard this time.
The start is very nice and progresses a little as progressive ;)
I do hear you have some experience tho,
BUT, its indeed not trance as you said in the PM :P
I hear also DNB ;) thats nice man :)
Its also a bit techno'isch..
What i hate about this track it is the weird sound, i dunno what vsts you used, but try to make it more trancy ;)
Well just as i told, the DNB is awsomeness ;)
The progression is also nice.
this track could be made bigger,
With a little tweakin and peakin here and there, and maybe some high notes added at some points :P
PS; dont use TOO much samples, it makes your track worthless/awfull man ;)
if you DO wanna use samples, make you own ;)
8/10 - 4/5 ;)
(Woops, sorry for lowering the rating of the track with 0.04 points, My bad xD)
-Tim
deadmetal420 
