I wasn't...
Feeling it...sounds like bad elevator music mixed in with a FF menu song...Unless you rapping is Amazing...I don't see how it could work with the bad piano, and even worse synth.
Author Comments
EDIT: Tuned the piano. Tell me how it sounds. If it's good, I'll keep it, If not, i'll go back to the original version.
My second offering. This song symbolizes how the struggle of people in a rough hood, and I hope you recognize that. The first few seconds may make it seem like a loop, but it's not; listen to the whole thing before a review or comment please. I'm proud of the way it turned out. Feedback would be awesome. I know the piano is kinda awkward, but it only really sounds like that because of the combination of other sounds. One day I will release this instrumental with vocals. Produced by thompsontalker79 using FL Studio 8.
thompsontalker79 responds:
Well damnit, at least say it's good elevator music! lol
Work on it
The piano is way out of tune, even without the other instruments, something is very wrong with it. Now I do think you have a good start to a song here, get the piano in tune and it will sound great. Now the part that starts before the 1:00 mark is kind of strange. It needs more work, more sound, it's empty right now. I'm really not trying to discourage you here, and all those things I mentioned can probably be fixed in about 2hours.
thompsontalker79 responds:
Thx for the review, I was gonna use a better piano, but FL Keys is all I had. Maybe after I get a better piano, I can retune the piano and make it sound better.
o.o...
I do listen to Rap often, This would have been better, If the piano was more in tune.
Other than that, pretty fresh.
Credits & Info
- Listens
- 640
- Downloads
- 44
- Score
- Waiting for 2 more votes
- Uploaded
- May 28, 2009
- 8:37 PM EDT
- Genre
- Hip Hop - Modern
- File Info
- Song
- 4.1 MB
- 3 min 37 sec
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