Yeah...it's really repetitive lol
Ummm yeah its just sorta to repetitive for my liking...im not to sure how you can improve on that...hmmm...Maybe add a Melody, and not to late in the song...or have the instrument that you have going throughout it sort of stall a little and go virrr vvviiir vir vir vir vir...increasing with speed while going up on a Chromatic scale. (hard to explain lol) Then add you melody there. Just an Idea...
Its not really a dance song, well for me at least. I was waiting for something else to happen because there was like 4 minutes in this song...but nothing did...like just a pitch change...
6/10
3/5
Good try for your first ;) keep em coming :)