OK.

This would be a decent song with metal and piano combined. Nothing too special.

realy simple

but i like it a loobt....id change the guitar....but i like it man....god j

i liked it

not bad at all
i presonally like the whole piano collaboration with metal

Not too bad not to bad at all

The beat is great. Just needs a little bit of filtering and this would be great.

I like it

This shows great promise. If you really get the hang of the filtering and stuff, I think you'll be kicking ass in no time.