The melody is pretty fun imo. Altho its a tad highpitched. I suggest you lower it a bit and add some reeverb for a smoother feel. The subsquarebass goes well with the melody. Good layering of chords.
The percs seems a tad simple imo. The kick is on the weak side and hard to hear, even with the headphone on. You didn't use any other beside the kick and the reversed clash. Add some more percs ( snares hats claps etc ) to make your track more intense. It will give the illusion that its faster.
To master your percussion ( for beginners ) I suggest you upper the volume and compress. When you completely mastered that, try looking some EQ tutorials.
i loved this it sounded so cool, i just let it loop in the backround for a while and it sounded nice.
ide love for it too be longer though
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