well, i recenly was listening to the song "father of mine" by Everclear. i won't go into details, but that song means a lot to my dad. erm.... look up the lyrics. anyway, i decided to rewrite the song's lyrics to change it from list of grievances to message of thanks to my father. i plan to give him the rewritten song as a gift of some kind... it will mean a lot to him i have completed rewriting them, and plan to record it soon. in the meantime, listen to this.

this is the second out of 2 different approaches. the first can be found here;
http://www.newgrounds.com /audio/listen/240347
(yeah, get rid of the spaces)

note- i want to make this song perfect for my dad, so _constructive_ criticism is appreciated.

~DM