Interesting new stuff
I think that because of the natural beat of the original song, your usual style doesn't work well here. The song really wants to focus of the normal Evny beat, which is usually awesome, but because of the time signature of the song, it feels like it's straining to get away from the song the whole time. Not your fault at all, it just doesn't seem this song would work with your style. The only suggestion I could make is go with less Envy and more of the original somehow, but I'm not even sure if I know what that means :p
Good try, nonetheless. Keep it up.