uhm..

dude, not to be mean, but maybe if you took some composition classes or learned an instrument this would be better. All it is, is one UNharmonized melody which has a werid combination of instruments... Over and Over and Over... im sorry but maybe if the melody actual didnt sound cacophonous, it would be good. anyways, you do seem to be able to put instruments together and add a mood or atmosphere so i give you that, i say i didnt like this at all BUT i would wish to hear more of your stuff, you never know, sometimes we just hit a horrible composition...

Sorry..

Nicolas...