i kind of love this. dammit, make it longer!! it sounds so retro and thoughtful, and the beat is great. the noise in teh background gives it a lot of character. it's pretty well mixed, though some elements like the highpassed beat at around :25 are too loud, and there are a couple awkward pauses. but otherwise this is incredible. pleaassee work on this again! this is my kind of jam!
if you wish, check out my latest; i havent been back for a while. cheers.