SO MUCH WASTED POTENTIAL

Imma huge 8-bit fan, I made a newgrounds account just to comment on this.

So great move at the beginning with the the notes in random forming into a rhythm,

to be honest the DnB could not even be there, I feel you traded a great melody for a DnB to cover up the dry spots,

your melody was confusing with lack of a better word. The DnB just took everything away from it. This sounds RIGHT in the middle of background music for a commercial (bad) and a game's theme song (very good)

Melody: Get a stronger, bolder one
Harmony: Keep
Bassline: Keep
DnB: Consider scrapping or halving the volume
Supplements: Keep (Even though I HATE the claps)

It has so much potential to be so much more.

Thank you.

When I need inspiration, I put my headset on, and listen to this song. It helps a lot.

Thank you.

sweet baby jesus!

I came in with low expectations, somewhat.
wasn't expecting anything different, but hot damn! this thing is awesome.
Great work.

Ehm?

Well im not completely sure was that drum n bass or what ever :S I like it how it sounds "random" but still it has a rhyme.

brah

excellent percussion, i wanna lick ur balls