Rap and Beat by me, kinda slow laidback flow. I think you'll like it ;)
A put some effort into the chorus with many voiceovers.
Great Modern Hip Hop, Original!
As i've said before, your music is the only Hip-hop i can listen too, this too
is what I'd expect from you, I could loop this all Day, like a previous poster have said, the chorus is really uniqe and gives it your own flavour, and that is one of the things I Love with your songs, you have your own style. I love this song!
Ooooo....
+Great work on this track. This song is smooth bro, you have out done yourself on this one. Great work on the chorus and the verses are tight. You're flowin pro.The beat is passionate.
-To me the chorus kind of sounds like it would be in a boy band song (manly because of the choir sound you mixed in), I dont mean that as an insult, that was just my first thought on it. You are a good singer, but the chorus sounded a bit sappy too me. It suits the mood of the song, I just wasnt diggin it.
My favourite part of this track is the rapping. Overall this track is fire. Keep at it bro, peace
Thanks for the review. I agree on the chorus, melancholy and choirs are weak spots of mine, but i try to put them to good use instead of getting rid of them. Its not very typical for hiphop i guess but one has to make his own music right? Anyway thanks for the kinds words, it means a lot to me that people bother to post. Im new here at Newgrounds so i feel as if i've recieved a warm welcome with this song.
solid track
Beat - 10
Rhymes - 10
Mixing - 10
5/5
This is one of the better tracks I have heard on here in awhile. Keep it up!!
Warms my heart! Thank you very much indeed :)
TOP NOTCH
WOW, this is really really good! Really professional sonics, man! You could just waltz into a record label and get a contract right now! Flawless rhymes and flow and awesome work on the chorus! I have absolutely nothing bad to comment on this piece, and believe I usually ALWAYS have some negative crit to say. But this.. this is ready to be played on commercial radio!
DAMN good work! I'm really impressed!
Thank you very much for your kind words. I admit im quite pleased with this song but naturally i strive to make my next rapsong even better and praise is always a good injection of inspiration.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
dizzlebeat 
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