It's cool

I actually really like this. You should add some other instruments to make it feel complete. Even though you mentioned that you can't sing, I think you should have at least gave it a try. But anyway, nice job. Keep on rockin :)

good.

its pretty good. i have to agree with gede. it does sound like cannon rock in some places. plus i also agree with avaggon it could use some lyrics. plus it needs a bit of cleaning up. but its really good. just a bit of fixing here and there and this could top the charts here on NG. i would love to hear u make another version thats a bit cleaner and with the lyrics u mentioned. but ovor all a good song. RESPECT BRO.

good, but..

It sounds too much canon rock..

im only a kid, but..

i could sing this, and also ill hand you a tip, audcity is a better recording software.
very orrigional cool

Tight.

That was pretty sweet - get some drums, bass, vocals...and you're all set! Lol, I love that riff. Favorite four chords of all time. Awesome dude.