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Author Comments

This is my second submission to the audio portal though this one doesn't suck. But it's still missing something, and i was hoping someone here could help identify what that is. Also this is only a preview, and I'm still having troubles with the volume on certain notes, but that will be fixed soon.

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SilentC

2010-09-16 15:21:15

Paino was good

i would of liked a little more in the background at the start and the thump needs to be a bit softer but i liked the paino part great

netty-swobb

2009-04-25 09:12:57

This is not great

As dude23 said, work on the melody.

dude23

2009-04-25 08:59:20

Kinda wack

Not very pleasing to the ears, and I like late John Coltrane. Too many pianos, lol. I'd concentrate on fixing some of the harmonies. I don't know how to explain what I'm thinking other than by saying I can tell you don't know what you're doing exactly at this moment in time. Also, the switch between Major and minor (or blues) feels a little weird. Work on the melody.

Zombiebones responds:

Thanks, this advice will help help quite a bit.