needs lots of work

i understand that this song is not finished but i will say what i have to say...

the whole song and all of the sounds sound like they are on the save fequency level. as if the eq it a straight line... heres a cool tip.

lower/mute the volume to every single track and sound and start with the drums. bring up all the drum sounds until you get the mix just right. then raise some of the filelr/middle tracks chords etc... and get those to work with the song, make sure use use a compresser to help but don't over compress. then bring up the leads/hook and get that just right. bass is next but don't over power it. once done the mix should sound better, make sure the drums and the leads/hook stand out and the other sounds stick in the middle, play around with eq to get a wider richer range. then have some sort of sound in the bg, this will give teh illusion of a nice 3d full sound that always sounds awesome

don't take this the wrong way but i ask everyone, did you play any of the intsruments or is this all computer generated... i ask everyone

hmm...

seems to be great if u finish that.
5/5

srry for short review gtg. keep up on your work!

It's okay

not the best i've heard either.
good for a noob =)

Helth
5/5

Nice buildup, shame it's over so soon :(

Builds nicely and around 30 seconds or so the melody kicks in: unfortunately it's a little too short for me and the ending just ...well, ends: I was hoping for a little more...