Woah
Ok, if your using Fruity Loopz, Try compressing and Limitizing the sounds their a bit overpowering, add a soft threshold and it would be better to listen too ^^
Thats first off
Second off, is that slayer? beacuse if it is thats a really nasty guitar sound, I Advise finding another VST or something to replace it with as there are a few around that heavily dislike that sound.
Other then that the riff's are pretty cool so far, I like it (=
Keep it up, try what I said to do!
~Happy Music Making -Squll
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