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This is great

Has a nice neo-classical vibe to it, and it's structure really well. Goes places, doesn't get boring. Aside from the ok sounding piano, this gets a 5.

Sounds much like the house-building stage on the Sims.

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Themes, ah the themes

Pardon me for delving in too much into a great song such as this, but I just survived an AP English exam, so this is heavily inspired by that and a lack of sleep.

When I listen to this song, I see an attempted suicide. 00:00 through 00:39 sees the child tossing and turning in his bed. At 00:40, he awakens, covered in sweat, breathing heavily. His dreams are haunting him, dreams of the past. At 1:55, he is setting up to hang himself, but his parents decide to check up on him. At 2:37, they see him attempting suicide and save him before he is able to go through with it. At 3:04, he is tossing and turning in bed again, but in a padded cell with a barred window. He is too much of a danger to himself.

Anyway, as I said, I apologize for delving too much into this. It really is a great song, and I'm definitely going to add it to my favorites...

...Let me know if I was close to what you were trying to convey?

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paravindskey responds:

I've never thought this way, you really surprised me, thanks for sharing with your opinion.


Sounds great, really an one-of-a-kind piece in my book. Has an overall sense of calmness with a melancholic accent put to it, and had some subtle changes to it - the one I noted best was from 0:32 to 0:44; The relaxing, melancholic tune faded away and got replaced with a more ... "dark" sound; it gives a rather eerie impression that there's a negative disturbance, there's something happening that shouldn't normally do, but you can't see what or where. Sort of like you're walking alone in a country field at sunset, and you feel like someone's behind you, like you're being watched, but when you turn around there's nothing there. Don't get me wrong, I'm not poointing it out as a flaw, I'm pointing it out as a well-placed change that gives diversity and character to your tune. Anyways, great job, this is definitely going in my faves.

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paravindskey responds:

Thank you! Soon I'll submit new song in my opinion even better


i feel like i should be in a very high class suit working in a huge city in my office,looking out my window and listening to this ha

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wow ... just plain wow ....

did you do this on a key bored .. or did you use FX ... but either way .. it is incredible ...

paravindskey responds:

This is just stage piano with large hall reverb

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4.08 / 5.00

Apr 21, 2009
9:11 AM EDT
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3.1 MB
3 min 22 sec

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